Tuesday, March 3, 2015

These Pretty Girls

These pretty girls with pretty faces passed my eyes.  Pretty girls with pretty smiles that everybody loves.  Pretty girls with pretty eyes that you could stare into and not only will you see the sparks in them but also their very bright future.  Pretty girls with pretty hair that flowed like waterfalls over their shoulders.  Pretty girls with pretty lips that were covered by lipstick as bright as blood.  Pretty girls with pretty faces didn't seem so pretty.  Pretty girls with pretty faces coated in make up.  These pretty girls with their pretty smiles, eyes, hair, lips, and faces were everywhere.  But these pretty girls were not real.

4 comments:

  1. This is a very thought-provoking post. I had to read it twice. I love how you turned your post around from the beginning to the end.

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  2. Vivid descriptions about these pretty girls and then an interesting conclusion - they're not real.

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  3. This is such a poetic slice and I liked the surprise ending.

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  4. You are such a gifted writer. Absolutely nailed it, too. There are so many people out there putting on this "pretty girl" front and inside, which reflects to the outside, there is no beauty. Very insightful.

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